My original idea was that Danielle, the last of the living ancients, saw the wraith coming to power in her village. I decided that instead of that she saw a new enemy raising to power. An Enemy called- The Givers. A wealthy force that takes from the poor to keep for themselves or give to other wealthy leaders to keep power, hence the title of the Givers. They were a greedy group of Ancients. Danielle was part of a resistince called- The Takers. The Takers would do their best to make the Givers look bad, by either stealing the Givers ZPMs and money or ruining the Givers plans. Danielle got put into the pod because she got caught trying to steal the Givers ZPM that ran the Givers main ship. The Wraith came and destroyed everything before they had a chance to release her. The Wraith think they destroyed everything but they didn't find the Takers ZPM strong hold that is deep underground. the ZPMs they have are very special. They load in 10 times more power then the ZPM that Atlantis has. There is an up side to it and a down side. The downside once the ZPMs are found, it sends a long range EM pulse and attracts the wraith and the wraith steal them. It's up to danielle and the Team to get the ZPMs back.
My idea on the village-
It's unheard of village were some of the Ancients stayed but not all. Danielle has never heard of Atlantis and has never been there. You can't tell she is an Ancient at first glance. She has the powers of the Ancients she doesn't even know about so there could be MAJOR character developements for this character. Like when she sees Atlantis for the first time and when she sees the wraith, who she has only heard about in nightmarish tales. And also when she discovers her powers. It wouldn't spoil the secret of Atlantis cause she knows nothing of Atlantis or her powers for that matter.
Personal input-
I would be thrilled if my story idea got picked up. It is a dream of mine to see a story that i came up with on screen. I may be young but that shouldn't matter. I am a hard worker and i get very good grades. I think this idea is something good....and i hope it can bring good things for my family, who at this time is having a lot of money problems.
My dream-
To get my story idea picked up and get to go to canada, meet the cast of Atlantis, watch my story being filmed and watch how directing a TV show goes since i want to be a director one day.
~~~~To anyone that is involved with stargate Atlantis~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Please give me a chance. I think my story idea is pretty good. Make this girls' dream come true. I'll await your answer. If you have any questions just ask me. Some things are better to explain when asked about. Thank you for your time.
~Danielle Swantek
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